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It's hard to say much about such a solid piece. You've obviously taken the time to develop your line weights and use them effectively to draw attention to where you want it. The flow of this piece is natural and well paced. Surprisingly, and to your credit, the lack of mouths and noses does not prevent you from being able to emote through these characters, the body language is clear. There is possibly too much detail in the trees, while they do look great, they are a little busy, though not distracting. There is also some hatching marks that I'm assuming are there to denote grass, it is also possibly a bit much, particularly in the lower left panel, where it almost crowds the wobbly leg indicators. I find that your use of the grey layers in the grassy areas is sufficient to differentiate between grassy area and the path. However I am nitpicking to give you ideas on what you might consider in the future. This piece is very pleasing to look at and read, and I am especially fond of your ability to set tone with shading.